Comments for Blown Out of Proportion http://blownout.wordpress.com Just another WordPress.com weblog Mon, 10 Mar 2008 23:34:15 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Chapter Nineteen – The Light Is Extinguished by Margaret http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/03/10/chapter-nineteen-the-light-is-extinguished/#comment-35 Margaret Mon, 10 Mar 2008 23:34:15 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=22#comment-35 Hi Thoroughly enjoyed this story - hope you will write another - I was kept in suspense all the way through. Well done Hi
Thoroughly enjoyed this story – hope you will write another – I was kept in suspense all the way through. Well done

]]> Comment on Chapter Nineteen – The Light Is Extinguished by Josie http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/03/10/chapter-nineteen-the-light-is-extinguished/#comment-31 Josie Mon, 10 Mar 2008 10:21:06 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=22#comment-31 Jo that was absolutely brilliant. dont know how you do it. Jo that was absolutely brilliant. dont know how you do it.

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]]> Comment on Chapter Fifteen End Of The Tunnel? by Stacey Derbinshire http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/03/08/chapter-fifteen-end-of-the-tunnel/#comment-20 Stacey Derbinshire Sat, 08 Mar 2008 21:42:58 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=18#comment-20 I found your blog on google and read a few of your other posts. I just added you to my Google News Reader. Keep up the good work. Look forward to reading more from you in the future. Stacey Derbinshire I found your blog on google and read a few of your other posts. I just added you to my Google News Reader. Keep up the good work. Look forward to reading more from you in the future.

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]]> Comment on Chapter Seven Fire In Her Eyes by margaret naismith http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/02/25/chapter-seven-fire-in-her-eyes/#comment-8 margaret naismith Mon, 25 Feb 2008 00:25:42 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=10#comment-8 jo, this just gets better and better - you writing style and prose is really good and i am now at the "what happens next" stage. well done xxx jo, this just gets better and better – you writing style and prose is really good and i am now at the “what happens next” stage. well done xxx

]]> Comment on Chapter Four – The Pain Of Glass by josie http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/02/19/chapter-four-%e2%80%93-the-pain-of-glass/#comment-7 josie Tue, 19 Feb 2008 22:37:36 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=7#comment-7 this is brilliant Jo. Cant wait for the next episode. Building up very well this is brilliant Jo. Cant wait for the next episode. Building up very well

]]> Comment on Blown Out of Proportion – a daily book soap by NiaPritchard http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/02/16/blown-out-of-proportion-a-daily-book-soap/#comment-6 NiaPritchard Tue, 19 Feb 2008 22:11:02 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=3#comment-6 Hiya, I've read this chapter and had a quick look at the others what I have picked up on is you do use a lot of descriptive detail which is good. One comment I used to get when I first started sending my manuscript off was it lack details which made the story lack atmosphere. I tried to describe every detail so the reader actually felt they were there......its seemed to work the publisher liked that. I think you have made a good job of that. I'll take a look at the rest , Well done keep it up very impressed at your commitment, Nia.x Hiya,

I’ve read this chapter and had a quick look at the others what I have picked up on is you do use a lot of descriptive detail which is good. One comment I used to get when I first started sending my manuscript off was it lack details which made the story lack atmosphere. I tried to describe every detail so the reader actually felt they were there……its seemed to work the publisher liked that. I think you have made a good job of that.

I’ll take a look at the rest ,

Well done keep it up very impressed at your commitment,

Nia.x

]]> Comment on Chapter Four – The Pain Of Glass by Mary O http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/02/19/chapter-four-%e2%80%93-the-pain-of-glass/#comment-5 Mary O Tue, 19 Feb 2008 18:07:19 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=7#comment-5 hi craftyjo... what a brillliant story.. you are so talented Mary xx hi craftyjo… what a brillliant story.. you are so talented

Mary xx

]]> Comment on Chapter Four – The Pain Of Glass by Mary o http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/02/19/chapter-four-%e2%80%93-the-pain-of-glass/#comment-4 Mary o Tue, 19 Feb 2008 18:06:03 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=7#comment-4 hi craftyjo... think this is terrific.. well done.. xx hi craftyjo… think this is terrific.. well done..

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]]> Comment on Blown Out of Proportion – a daily book soap by Tiggy http://blownout.wordpress.com/2008/02/16/blown-out-of-proportion-a-daily-book-soap/#comment-3 Tiggy Sat, 16 Feb 2008 20:10:38 +0000 http://blownout.wordpress.com/?p=3#comment-3 I can relate to all of the above! makes my palms sweaty at the thought of having to go through the rigmarole that the return-to-work Mother has to go through! I can relate to all of the above! makes my palms sweaty at the thought of having to go through the rigmarole that the return-to-work Mother has to go through!

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